Object Writing

I can't pick a winner for the in-class writing exercise because they were all so good, and there were different reasons why they worked. Here are just a few of the sentences that stood out (though ALL of you had good work): ****** "Dust motes drifted by as I watched him get ready to open the store. He was a kind old man, whith hands leathered by age. Yet each time, the rough, calloused hands picked me up, their touch was a soft as the cloth he used to polish the cabinet." ******* "When I was young, my grandmother had this set of Russian nesting dolls. Every day when I went to her house after shool, I had to play with them. In borken English, she would tell me to be gentle. 'I know!' I would yell, as I ripped the dolls apart. I grew older and stopped visiting her apartment. Soon, I began to forget them." ******* "I didn't know you that well but I would see you in the halls all the time. You were the popluar girl and I was the loner...